Peer review

l What do you like best about your peer’s summary? (Why? How might he or she do more of it? )
The best part I like this sentence in summary: It is said that the father kept that gold box by his bed for years, when he felt discouraged he would take out a kiss and remember his daughter’s love. Anothy points out the main thing which is his daughter’s and father’s love.

l Is it clear what is being summarized? (i.e. Did your peer list the source and cite it correctly? )
Yes, Anothy’s writing is sequence of organization. She writes about what happen, when, who, where, and how. I read this summary and know the story what talk about directly.

l Is the thesis of the original essay clear in the summary? (Write out what you think that thesis is.)
Yes, she writes it from the beginning to the end, and she points out the thesis of the essay clearly.

l If you have read the original source, did you identify the same thesis? (If not, how does it differ?)
Yes, she indicates that what happen between a father and a daughter, and writes about cause and effect in this story. I have the same thesis with her.

l Did your peer miss any key points from his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
Yes, I think she miss some words in the conclusion. I think she could add and summarize the sentence is “There is no more precious possession that anyone could hold.”

l Did your peer include any of his own opinion in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, she didn’t include any of her own opinion in her summary.

l Did your peer include any unimportant details in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, I could read any detail in her summary.

l Were any points in the summary lost? (If so, where and how night it be fixed? why do you think it might be important?)
I think she didn’t write the conclusion completely. She didn’t point out the final sentences of the essay which is “In a very real sense, each of us as humans has been given a gold container filled with unconditional love and kisses from our children, friends, and family, or God. There is no more precious possession that anyone could hole.” I think she understood the whole story, but she didn’t indicate that meanings of the essay in conclusion.